Thursday, December 28, 2017

Book Review: One Thousand White Women, the Journals of May Dodd


Alternate histories always grab my attention, and I’ve read a good number through the years from authors like Orson Scott Card and Harry Turtledove. One Thousand White Women is one of the best alternate histories I’ve read.

Jim Fergus has taken a bit from history and expanded it to what never happened, and along the way, he makes you believe it did happen. That’s a remarkable skill!

May Dodd, languishing in a 19th century insane asylum, takes advantage of a unique opportunity to escape confinement. Placed in the asylum by her wealthy family for daring to defy the strictures of her status and contemporary mores, May chafes at the unfairness of her situation and longs to be free.

Concomitantly, a Cheyenne Nation chief, seeking lasting peace for his people, goes to D.C. to meet with President Grant to present an interesting proposal. If the United States would send 1000 white women to marry Cheyenne braves, the children of such unions would belong to their mothers’ clans, not the braves’ clans. Thus, the natives would become civilized faster and absorbed readily into the dominant white culture. For the 1000 white women, the Cheyenne would provide the U.S. government with 1000 horses.

This proposal actually occurred. However, Grant and others rejected the Cheyenne’s request as unthinkable. And we all know how their actual Native American assimilation thing worked out.

In Fegus’ novel, the government decides they will create a secret program to send forgotten women West as part of the program. The women they gathered up were indigents, “mildly insane” (like May), imprisoned, or women who had no other career or marital prospects. What a great way to take a bit in history and create an alternate history for it!

The description of the train ride West and stops at various forts is filled with vivid images and a rich ensemble cast of women from various walks of life, all of whom have their separate reasons for joining the program. May keeps meticulous journals of her time and adventures. Her story is revealed to the world through the journals that a descendant tracked down after coming to believe the family tale of May’s life to be untrue.

Her journals include letters never sent to family members and others as well as detailed recounting of conversations with other passengers. Through this device, we learn much about the American West and the issues surrounding how to deal with the Native Americans who live where the White man wants to live. We learn of these through different expressed viewpoints, so that is enlightening.

However, May isn’t totally believable. She expresses viewpoints and insights that are not of her time. She seems like a time-traveler sometimes when she expresses ideas and uses language that are anachronistic, even for a forward-thinking woman in the last half of the 19th century. I address this in an earlier post of the challenges of writing historical fiction.

I haven’t read the sequel, following twins, two of the program’s women. But I am looking forward to picking it up. That books is The Vengeance of Mothers, and if it’s as well-written and researched as One Thousand White Women, I am in for a treat as to historical information. Let’s hope from a reality standpoint that the womens’ perspectives are better portrayed.

The ending of One Thousand White Women is very satisfying and even offers some surprises that are consistent with the story. Finding out what happened to the others contributed to the feeling that the book was a true story and really occurred, as well as bringing closure to the book.

All in all, I enjoyed the story, and even as I was stopped by May’s perspectives a number of times, the richness of detail about life in the West made the book a very enjoyable read.


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Facebook: Caroline Adams likes alternate histories and enjoyed Jim Fergus’ ONE THOUSAND WHITE WOMEN. She reviews this novel based on a true proposal to trade 1000 horses for 1000 white women to become wives to Cheyenne braves, thus assimilating the Cheyenne into U.S. culture. http://bit.ly/2BXZFc9

Twitter: @Caroline_Adams9 reviews Jim Fergus’ ONE THOUSAND WHITE WOMEN, an alternate history of an actual event in Grant’s presidency, proposed to solve “the Indian problem.”  http://bit.ly/2BXZFc9

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